Awake
I awake into darkness
The lamp's light shuddering my reluctant eye
Like a rusted man, joints tired, I dress in worker's clothes
My belly only full with toasted bread I walk into the chill of blackness,
A courage rises as a hard step
But by midday the fight is gone, my dreams returning to a bed's desire
Young
Years ago, when i was young,
i had a big lazy grin
It was fun, dreaming, smoking weed in the park
i hear the laughter sometimes of my old friends
Talking like a summer breeze, when time will come, when we are men
lovers of life, of women, of ourselves with lazy grin
Now I am old,
When I see these youth, I warn them to waste know years,
don't be like me, but mostly I wish i were them
What?
What do I need to do?
Slam shut the poem?
Lock it tightly so no verse escapes into me?
Is there purpose to fight such things?
Let it be what it is, perhaps
the words as the answer, the question revealed as a strange vastness
cul de sac
1 month ago
8 comments:
SC, three wonderful poems. But I am struck especialy by "Young." Ain't it the truth?? (your last line)
Oh yes, I recognize these feelings. Nostalgic wonderings......so well expressed.
The three para interlinked into one another expressing the old age feeling.Well written!
love them all but the second one is Wonderful...maybe be I wish I had my youth back also...would I be different maybe not but I would enjoy every minute of its precious freedom and love of everything new....blessings...bkm
Dear SC
I am still working on Young!
Lovely!
I can relate,
so powerful words.
The first one is so wonderful; it's how I feel every morning when I get out of bed.
Another set of lyrical brilliance SC. "A courage rises as a hard step
But by midday the fight is gone, my dreams returning to a bed's desire." Ah, the throes of a public servant. But also so many men (and women), like Walter Mitty I guess. Nice job.
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